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NEW DA ID-Afureru Kanjyou Ga Tomaranai

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EDIT: Fixed the BG :meow:
THIS IS WHY I'VE BEEN IGNORING YOU GUYS' REPLIES FOR THE PAST FEW HOURS ;A;

I'm finally glad to be done with this. It took me forever (Over 7 hours, to be exact) to do, and it wasted my studying time for the finals. But anyway, since I didn't like my old DA ID, I made a new one, based off of Yugioh Japanese Ending 4, Afureru Kanjyou Ga Tomaranai (These Overflowing Feelings Never Stop). I went all out and even made sure that the lines were proportionate when the image is flipped in Paint Tool SAI and when it isn't. That alone, was a pain. The second pain: SHADING. OMG. That's the part that mainly took me forever. I kept messing up my light source, and everything went haywire. So...yep. At first, I wrote part of the lyrics to the song using my mouse, but it didn't look right at all, so I just used a font. Oh, and also, THIS IS Kryysta's DEBUT...sort of. I adopted her from !Sea54311Shell a while ago, but she's banned now and all...so...yep. It felt great just drawing Forrester and Flitter again after a long while.
FEEL FREE TO CRITIQUE, COMMENT, AND FAV.
Oh, and I made a speedpaint for this ID, but it's extremely long. I'll post the link when the video is fixed a bit and is finished finalizing.

Tools Used:
Paint Tool SAI
Photoshop CS5
My Touchpad on my laptop

Forrester, Flitter, Kryysta, and art belong to me
Everything else goes to their respective owners.
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© 2012 - 2024 Millennium-Star
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buonotomatoes's avatar
Alright, lets starts with the not-so-goods.

NOT-SO-GOODS
:bulletred:To me the words seem a bit out of place. Maybe they couldve been put in the center (like in Word, the way so the words start in the center)
:bulletred:With the character on the left, i think he looks fine except his legs and tail. It looks like hes sitting on his tail
****:bulletred:The back legs are not anatomically correct-- theyre like sticks, same as the front ones. Maybe make them a bot more... Flexible looking. Like the others hind legs
:bulletred: Maybe make the other cats legs thincker, and look more as if theyre part of the cat (mainky on kiddle one for part-of). As for the hind legs, the thighs might need to be up higher and not so chunky. The leg part needs to be bigger
:bulletred:The background is fine, but looks a bit shaky.
:bulletred:The whiskers seem like somewhat of a distraction. Maybe make them not so thick and long, and not connected to the nose (they arent in real cats)

GOODS
:bulletgreen:I really like your style
:bulletgreen:I definitely get some emotion from the picture
:bulletgreen:The coloring is fantastic and so is the shading-- makes it very neat and catches your eye.
:bulletgreen:I like the fluffiness (if thats a word)
:bulletgreen:The background fading into a different color an dhaving different shapes on one side are both GREAT touches
:bulletgreen:I can definitely see the characters personalities

Now remember, this is supposed to be constructive
But overall, its great!